Blue ~ OSI
Christine August 31st, 2009
Blue sky on water
there is now no turning back
a miracle is doubtful
remorse is not an option
time is only one journey
a step into deep, clear water
reflecting cool under summer
blue sky around her ankles
two steps and
already she is half way there
off on another adventure
where questions are answered
and purpose revealed
the light shines on her face
as she walks across the water
to discover
to uncover the mystery
and maybe just see her father.
This poem is in response to the prompt at One Single Impression this week — “Blue”. Thanks to all the fine poets who gather there and contribute each week. This photo (click to enlarge) was taken in southwestern MT a couple weeks ago by our friend Bill Carroll of Colfax, WA. Thank you so much, Bill!
Note: I am losing a dear friend of many years to cancer and this piece I decided needed to be written to myself in a manner as one would explain death to a child. It’s a draft of a poem really, and one I will come back to eventually and work with later. The first verse I began to write as a tanka but then extended the piece adhering to the simple and succinct. It is hardly worthy of the subject but this is what my heart can understand at the moment.
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That’s a simple, beautiful and heartfelt poem Christine as well as a beautiful photo. I’m sorry to hear about your friend. I’m thinking of you.
So sorry to read this beautiful poem. I am sure he is waiting.
Death is a difficult subject, but this explanation, so poetic and beautiful, dignifies the experience by capturing the mystery as part of life. I am sorry about your struggle. Very sorry. I wish you and your friend peace.
Christine, this poem brought tears to my eyes. It’s simplicity and heartfelt emotion are a tribute to your friend. I’m sorry that you’re losing her.
You can see this is so heartfelt and poignant. A marvellous poem.
Your friends time is rendered now but your friendship will linger. I’m so sorry for what you are about to lose. Death is always a difficult time for us. Know that if you need to talk I’m an e-mail away. Bill’s photo is gorgeous. I’ll be thinking of you and your friend.
Having been through a similar experience recently, I’m sorry to hear about your friend. I hope you can still have some time to enjoy together.
Beautiful poem. I love the imagery in this piece. Best wishes to your friend. It is already a solid poem so I am sure it will only get better. This line is particularly poignant and vivid to me: “blue sky around her ankles.”
Best wishes.
I am sorry for your loss. Sometimes I find writing helps me put things in perspectice. A nice piece in the works.
Dearest Christine–
So sorry you’re losing your dear friend. I’m sure your walking beside her through this
is such a gift to her.
A mighty fine draft–
I really like these images and the sensory way they explain what is to us yet unexplainable.
Really, really lovely poem and the photo. Oh my.
Love to you–
This beautiful poem and photo captures the journey your friend is making. You have my sympathy and wish for Peace.
I thank you all for your kindest words very much. My theme this month will be: Love endures!
Sending a big hug your way Christine. I am sorry for your loss. This is a beautiful tribute…
A lovely cross-over poem – I’m so sorry for your friend and your loss. Wishing healing for you and continued comfort for her.
Peace
This is a beautiful poem- heartfelt and true. You captured your idea perfectly- I totally get it. I am so sorry about your friend…
Lovely photo. It suits your poem well. I am so sorry for you impending loss. It’s a journey we will all take. Not that that diminishes the mystery.
so much heart in this poem, and wisdom too. Wonderful, peaceful images “blue sky around her ankles.”